To whom it may concern:

    I am a student of East China Normal University. I would like to offer some suggestion about dormitories in our unveristy. By comparing with commondities of other university, I feel quite lucky to enjoy the high quality services from our university such as the pre-installed air-conditioners. However, there is one point I think which need to be improved: the absence of Internet access. 

To Whom It May Concern,

I am a student at our university. I would like to offer some suggestions about the telecom facility of students’ flat. By comparing with accommodation of other universities, I feel quite lucky to enjoy high quality services like the pre-installed air conditioners. However, the absence of Internet access seems an urgent issue to be solved.

The Internet has became essential part of our daliy life to everyone, let alone the students in university. We need take part in a lot of studying activies online such as dowloading the homework our teachers assigned. So it could be quite convinent if we can access the Internet in the dormitory instead of merely in the library. It could be very appericated if you could spend a few time to think about my suggestion and reply on it.

The Internet has became essential part in our daily life, we university students also take advantage of it massively. Downloading the homework, contacting professors via e-mail and browse paper online; all of these require Internet access. So it could be convinent if we can access the Internet in our accommodation rather than merely in the library. We will appericate it if you spend a little time to take our suggestions into consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming